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I asked my teacher to read my story

Mon Jul 6, 2009, 12:52 PM

Mood: Defeated
Listening to: Candy Kisses by Amanda Perez
Reading: nothing
Watching: nothing
Playing: nothing
Eating: nothing
Drinking: nothing

it was part of this vocab contract to use 20 and/or 10 words in a short story. I did both. Anyway I wrote two consecutive (<--- lol this is one of the vocab words) scenes from MD and I wrote on the paper "If you could have the time to read these that'd be awesome" and she read it. She even corrected a few errors. She wrote fantastic at the end :333333 I'm so happy I love it when people critique my story, let alone listen to what I have to say about it :33
I think I'll type it and put it up here. Would you guys read it if I did?

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~Scarledian Jul 6, 2009, 7:51:47 PM

Probably

If the teacher liked it, I might

But even then, I might still like it, even if they didn'r.. but that's just me

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Some people call me weird, and I ask them to define 'normal,' and guaranteed, they mistake 'normal' for popular and common.
..obviously that is NOT the answer to my question..

Think outside the box.. they said that, but now I can't get back IN!