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I asked my teacher to read my story

Mon Jul 6, 2009, 12:52 PM
  • Mood: Defeated
  • Listening to: Candy Kisses by Amanda Perez
  • Reading: nothing
  • Watching: nothing
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: nothing
it was part of this vocab contract to use 20 and/or 10 words in a short story. I did both. Anyway I wrote two consecutive (<--- lol this is one of the vocab words) scenes from MD and I wrote on the paper "If you could have the time to read these that'd be awesome" and she read it. She even corrected a few errors. She wrote fantastic at the end :333333 I'm so happy I love it when people critique my story, let alone listen to what I have to say about it :33
I think I'll type it and put it up here. Would you guys read it if I did?

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~Scarledian Jul 6, 2009, 7:51:47 PM
Probably :XD:
If the teacher liked it, I might ;)
But even then, I might still like it, even if they didn'r.. but that's just me :XD:

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"JESUS! You scared me.."
"Jesus didn't scare you.. I did"

Think outside the box.. they said that, but now I can't get back IN!
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